Monday, October 24, 2011

The North wind goddess!!



 The north wind goddess has black hair of silk.
 She sores with grace bring a cool  breeze when the days grow hot.
 Her sisters East, West, and South are known for their beauty, but only the lucky have seen their beautiful sister North.
 She guides you to your dreams when sleep falls upon you.
 With gentle kind blue eyes and long silky hair, she dresses in her dress only made of the softest clouds in the high sky.
 Most say that the three sisters East, West, and South are the kindest they know.
 But none have met their sister North the kindest of all.
 For with out North we would be lost forever.
 For when we lost she guides us home.
 And when we tiered she drift us to the nicest dreams.
 For she is the kindest, and the most gracious.
 We should all be thankful to North the one who guides us, the one who takes us to dreams, and the one who knows most. 
                                                               The End!!!
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3 comments:

  1. Presley, What a lovely poem! I especially enjoy reading pieces that you create just because you want to. You did a good edit also. You missed just a few pieces. Ask me in class and I'll help you with it.

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  2. A few spelling errors but over all amazing.
    I take back my comment about the Halloween poem.
    THIS is the best piece you've ever written.

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  3. Ditto, I completely agree with everything Maddy said!!!! Wow Presley, I love it.

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