Wednesday, October 19, 2011
It's Just a Game of Tag!!
In Los Angeles, there lived four 13-year-old friends-Amanda, James, Georgia, and Jake. They lived on Elm Street. They all went to the same school. Amanda had burgundy brown hair and light blue eyes. James had dark brown hair and brown eyes. Georgia had pure white hair and brown eyes. And Jake has sandy dark hair with blue eyes. Georgia and Jake were together and Amanda and James were together. One day they all were walking home from school when James suddenly said excitedly,
"Hey guys, why don't we visit the old haunted house on Tea Tree Street?"
Amanda replied, "What are you thinking. James, you know that street is forbidden to go on!"
"Well, we're already in trouble so how much more trouble can we get in?" asked Georgia sarcastically.
"Yeah, how much trouble would you get in, James?" Amanda said sarcastically.
"Well, I don't know about you but I actually think it sounds like a fun time. Plus we could play tag there like we used to," Jake said cheerfully.
"Jake, what are you thinking? You and I have to go and get to our date at the movies," Georgia said irritatingly.
"Oh, come on, Georgia. Why can't we just go to the haunted house? Plus I don't have enough money to pay for two movie tickets," Jake said now irritated.
"Well fine, you two boys go and me and Georgia will go and do our homework at home where it's safe from places like that!"
"What? No I'm going with the boys. You can go and do your homework. Playing tag there actually sounds fun. Plus, I'm not going to let Jake get away with not going to the movies with me!"
"What Georgia, you're not going with me?" asked Amanda stunned.
"Oh come on Amanda. You know you want to go! Plus it could be really fun! You never know you might have a lot of fun!" Georgia said pleasingly.
"Don't worry, Amanda. We won't be long at all. We'll only play one round of tag!" Jake replied reassuringly.
"Oh, I'm regretting this already!!!" Amanda complained. They got there and it looked about 100 years older than they remember but still they went in and started the game of tag!
" O.K. We decided that you're going to be it James since you decided that we should come here!" Jake announced.
"But that's not fair. You didn't even let me decide!" James complained.
"Sorry but that's what we decided!" Replied Jake.
"Fine! 1,2,3,4,5,6,7...," Jake started to count.
"Run!" Georgia sreamed In the distance, James began,
"9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30! Ready or not here I come!"
And then when James was about to tag Amanda, she screamed,"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh." James turned to see a huge man draped in a long black, silk robe with the hood on, walk up to them and then he stabbed James. James fell curled up at Amanda's feet! She screamed even louder but then the man stabbed her, too. Jake told Georgia,"Stay here. I'm going to investigate." Then he left her and went to see what all the screaming was about. But to his surprise it was his friends getting murdered. Downstairs Georgia waiting for Jake and her friends to come back, heard Jake scream in torture. She suddenly had a sick feeling and got up crying. She then saw a the man in black robes coming down the stairs and she knew what had happened! She saw that he had a bloody knife in his hand. She saw out of the corner of her eye a sharp knife on the floor. She dove and grabbed it and threw it at the man. It stabbed him in the heart. He died and she went upstairs and found her friend's body's and cried a long sad time. Then she got up and buried them in the nicest place in the cemetery and had a funeral for them.
One day she visited them and said aloud to herself, "It was only a game of tag!" The End!!!
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For some reason, the paragraphs are now messed up. Remember every time someone new talks, start a new paragraph. Could you fix this?
ReplyDeleteThere hows that?
ReplyDeleteLook at the end paragraphs. They are all wadded up into one.
ReplyDeleteMucho creepy
ReplyDeletevery scary!
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